The author views success as a means for a peaceful life. He believes that we can be successful by doing our best rather than competing with each other. He claims that we are so preoccupied with competition that we are more focused on trying to succeed than succeeding. I agree with the author on his ideas regarding success. We should do our best to succeed but we shouldn't be jealous of others' success. There will always be someone who is better than you. For instance, during my high school years, I was probably one of the best students in English. However, when I entered the university exams, there were many students who were ahead of me. To summarize, we should do our best, but not be jealous of others' success.
Dear Enes,
YanıtlaSilI enjyoyed reading your reflection. You have expressed your ideas very clearly. I can say that you have a fluent writing style. You write in a coherent manner. Your ideas are all relevant to the topic of the paragraph. As regards your language use, you have used English accurately throughout the refleiction. However, in terms of content, your ideas need to be elaborated on. You need to support your points by providing examples. Although you have provided one example from your personal life, I think you need to provide some more explanations on the author" s perspective by giving examples from the text as well. Even though your work is well-organized and coherent, it seems too short. In fact, it is below the required limit. However, al in all, I despite being short,your work is well-written..