6. Medicine is important when you're sick, but it is also important that you take care of yourself at these times.
7. The relationship between the body and the mind might seem boring, but the relationship between them is very interesting.
8. Many doctors charge very expensive rates. For example, my doctor charges $ 500 for an exam.
9. The magazine that I read is about how to increase longevity through better health.
10. The sun shines on my window, so I have my plants in the window box.
11. I heard about an acupuncture clinic which also has a specialist on herbal medicine.
Dear Enes,
YanıtlaSilThe majority of the sentences you have posted are well-formed and grammatically accurate. However, a couple of sentences need revising. For example, in Sentence 6, there is a faulty parallelism problem. The parts with "not only" and "but also" are not parallel. You need to make the part with "but also" parallel as well by using a "when" clause in the second part of the sentence (with "but also"). As for Sentence 7, the problem is related to the missing articles. You need to use the definite article "the" with the countable nouns "body" and "mind". The other sentences in the exercise are all correct. Keep up the good work!